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COLAD II pg 4 by charu-san COLAD II pg 4 by charu-san
Page 4

This is from a story by :iconsongbird21:
called The Colors of Life and Death: [link]
The story can also be found in her dA gallery :3
It's an adventure and romance-filled story,
and it's VERY good.
Recommended fanfic, guys ;D

Page 1: [link]

Page 2: [link]

Page 3: [link]

Page 4: Current Page

Page 5: [link]
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:iconsongbird21:
songbird21 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Professional Artisan Crafter
*Anime tear fountains* Want next pretty pagey!!
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avamaster400bestbud Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2007
*just read what happens* [link] O.O
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AkatsukiWizard Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
It won't show.
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Hisashii00 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2007
Omigosh, I can't wait! :wow: This is so anticipating!
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mistfoxx Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2007
I don't get it...DX Of course, I don't watch Naruto so...
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LordSpectreX Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007
I just lol at the people who say 'I can't wait to see what happens next,' because I know the result will suprise them. Must. Not. Give. Spoilers!

Good artwork, although it does feel quite empty, still good though.
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:iconsongbird21:
songbird21 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2007  Professional Artisan Crafter
Lol. *Pouts* Me wants next pagey!!!
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denis71 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2007
It`s ... I love it
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InuMiya Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
omg! I remember this part!!! ewwww.... >.<
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9Mizu6 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
woah, WE WANT TO SEE IT >.<
*-* i am so excited about *-* just give us FOOD XP
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akurei-tamashii Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
more!
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xXCaiterlynXx Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
me likely! :)
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InsanoFreako Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2007
*plays dramatic music* dun dun DUN!!!!!!!! hee hee, already read the story, can't wait to see how u draw the next scene ;p
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InsanoFreako Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008
There's a link to the story in the artist's comments in that picture.
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AkatsukiWizard Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
Where can I find the story?!
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AkatsukiWizard Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2007
Where can I find the story?
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Kayia Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007
GAH! *bashes head on desk* i really want the next page!! TT-TT
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autumn175 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007
awesome, I want to know whats in the room!!!
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FrozenTempest Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007  Student Digital Artist
your not going to like it.
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FrozenTempest Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007  Student Digital Artist
what do you think would of made hinata throw up, sakura in shock and sasuke speech-less?
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:iconautumn175:
autumn175 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007
why? :(
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:iconfrozentempest:
FrozenTempest Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007  Student Digital Artist
what do you think would of made hinata throw up, sakura in shock and sasuke speech-less?
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:iconautumn175:
autumn175 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007
umm, i dont know >.> maybe something happened to naruto :(
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:iconfrozentempest:
FrozenTempest Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007  Student Digital Artist
yep, and thats all im going to say. It's too horrbile to describe.
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autumn175 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007
:( oh no......
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manakeyuumaster Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007
Can't wait till the next page....come on next page please
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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wonder what is going on. I am so hyped for the next page D:
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mooona-chan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
oooooh, i cant wait for the next page~!
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zhengxinxin Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
*wating*
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mangastudent Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
AHHHHHHHHHHH, cant wait for the next chapter!!!
why?
WHY!!??
why did u leave it here!!!!!
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IMNOTCRAZY1 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
I just want to say that there is no way that that is a good fanfic. Sasuke went out of character in the FIRST CHAPTER!!! I couldn't handle the out-of-character-ness for even half of the first chapter.
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UzumakiSaru21 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007
What the hell is your problem? Colers of Life and Death is one of the best stories on fanfiction, and Songbird21-san is one of the best authors I've ever seen. So don't go around putting down stories just because you don't like em. Shut up baka before I have to go Kyuubi on ya!
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IMNOTCRAZY1 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2007
I'm sorry, but I have to say STOP BEING SUCH A NARUTARD!!! Don't go around and say "baka" just because they say it in Naruto a lot. You sound like an idiot. Either write in all japanese, or stick to english.

There is no way that someone is a good fanfiction writer if they bring the canon characters out of character in the first chapter, and even BEFORE the events of the first chapter, in a flashback. I't just a quick-fix for not wanting to go find Sasuke, bring him back, and make him like his team again. Shortcuts are for losers and bad fanfiction writers. She may be able to make a good story, but she's definitely not a good fanfiction righter. She should stick to complete OC's.
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UzumakiSaru21 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2007
*Sigh* How to explain this to someone with such a superiority complex... You see, this would be the point of Fanfiction, see what I said there FANFICTION, not CANNONFICTION, the reason he's OOC is because thats what the story is about. Oh, and by the way, I take Japanese lessons, I've only seen the Japanese version of Naruo about five times. *Holds up five fingers* Can you count that high? Ahou haisha.
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IMNOTCRAZY1 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2007
I do not have a superiority complex. Good fanfictions keep the CANNON characters relatively in character. CANNON should STAY CANNON. End of story. IMO, there are only two kinds of good fanfictions: ones where Cannon characters stay IC and ones where they are so OOC it is hilarious. Got it?

No wonder. You are one of THOSE. Go watch your English Dubb on Cartoon Network. No, YOU shut up loser. And go ahead and write in actual Japanese. Romaji is pathetic.
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UzumakiSaru21 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2007
Ah... you see I don't watch the english version either, I prefer to read the Manga, and you DO have a superiority complex because you think you know everthing. I really dislike close-minded people such as your self. Shatto za jigoku ue temae ijirashii hitobito! By the way, this is getting rather boring, so just stop being such a dumbass.
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IMNOTCRAZY1 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2007
please, enlighten me. Why do you think that I think I know everything? Just because I choose to write in a sophisticated manner does not mean that I think that I know everything. Quite the contrary, you seem to think you know everything about ME. I am not close-minded. You do not know me. From this one instance of my being opposed to something you like, you should not make the completely wrong impression that I am close-minded. On many matters, I am very open-minded, and the only time when I am close-minded is when I have thoroughly explored all sides of an argument and have determined one to be far more sound, stable, and strong than all of the others, in reference to debates, although when new evidence presents itself, I reopen my evaluation.

I have tried to read OOC fanfics before, but I always find myself frustrated because I know that that character would NEVER do what they were made to do by the writer. There is no transition from the character we know and love to what the author made him/her into. It is simply not the same character. I believe I have made my point.

The petty insults are not appreciated, whether in Japanese or English. You are being rather immature about the whole thing. You shouldn't have gotten so offended for a simple opinion of a piece of literature I have, if I may remind you of how this started. I will have my opinions and you will have yours. There is no reason for you to get upset.
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songbird21 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007  Professional Artisan Crafter
The reason he is upset is because although you write with sophistication you use is to be extremely condescending.

And if you had read further into the chapter you would've see that the whole thing in the hospital was only because of the situation. Honestly, how can you judge it after half of a chapter? Not that I'm upset about you having a negative opinion, but when you express that opinion in such a way that the criticism has absolutely no chance of being called anything close to constructive--that's when your review becomes nothing other than a rude attack.
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UzumakiSaru21 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007
Ah, I guess you are right, I apologize, I was acting a bit immature,sumimasen Sorry...It's just that I don't like people to insult ANYTHING they don't like just because it doesn't appeal to their tastes. *Yawn* (I'm rather tired, it's 7:05 bleh, early mornings. you know how it is ^^) But please, just stop insulting everything you don't like, ok?
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charu-san Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
nvm my last comment xD
I noticed that some have been feeling weird about that, too...
*shrug*
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jablesi Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
GOTTA SEE WUT HAPPEN :crying:
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:iconneko-girl-cindy-chan:
oh god...i...just readed that chapter....
you really are drawing "THAT"...:0
OMG...how? :0
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IMNOTCRAZY1 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
what is THAT???
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charu-san Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
You'll have to read the story to find out :XD:
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HinataHyuga13 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
:noes:
ive already read it >>
the next page is.... :fear:
but still i cant wait to see it...
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JadeLiChen Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007   Writer
Gah! You're just like songbird, always leaving us at the edge of our seat! :worship: I eagerly await the next update or great and powerful doujinshi writer. :)
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songbird21 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007  Professional Artisan Crafter
OMG OMG OMG *Bounces* I can't wait for the next page. You are a GODDESS!!!!!!!!!! :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
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EmperorBassexe Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
I've read the story so much already but I still anticipate how you're going to go about doing this scene, Charu-san, good luck! :wave:

The rest of you guys who haven't read the CoLaD series, you're gonna be shocked. :o
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C4nis-Lupis Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
D: I really, really don't like where this is going.
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ShadowDragon4ever Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
COME ON COME ON!! NEXT PAGE!!
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