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Short story to it:

Naruto and Hinata had just been on the most hectic date
they'll ever have...

...and it all started when Naruto forgot to bring his wallet
to pay for their luxurious dinner - which he planned for days
for it to be perfect. And Hinata was a bit uncomfortable
about his dedication to their very first date, located at the
farthest corner of Konoha where many aristocrats, the
privileged, and other upper-class men meet. Yet it was
undeniably impressive. Something unexpected, yet
expected from the unpredictable knucklehead of the village.

Some troubles here, some rampage there, and some
chaos everywhere...and along the way, new friends were
made - one of them being a nobleman who, to both Naruto's
and Hinata's discomfort, was a fan of Jiraiya's books and
the toad sage himself.

And even with all the disarray, the couple had had time for...
romance. Well, that's what Hinata sees it as (and she
might've even seen Naruto blush once!). They held hands
most of the time - mostly because she couldn't keep up with
Naruto while they ran from angry mobs, considering the fact
that she was wearing a dress.

And Naruto had to keep Hinata in his arms and hold her
tight (because they were hiding in the shadows and had to
keep quiet).

Some more troubles here, some more rampage there,
and some more chaos everywhere. And Naruto somehow
managed to make his left arm bleed after going through
the forest. He felt guilty after Hinata tore up the hem of her
dress to use as the bandage they lacked. She felt colder after
that, and as he saw her shiver, he gave her his sweater.
(yes, gave, not offered).

Naruto sighed as he slumped back on the training post.
(To think that they ran all the way from the corner of Konoha
to the training grounds). He looked over to Hinata.

Despite all the trouble they got into, she still managed to remain
the beautiful angel she was. He apologized to Hinata for
messing up their date so badly. To his surprise, she scooted
next to him and leaned on his chest. Out of her mouth, she had
barely whispered the words that made the night so special and
wonderful that he had almost forgotten that he screwed it up.

"As long as it was with you, Naruto-kun...it was a perfect night."

Okay, that sounded a bit corny, but it was the first time anyone
had appreciated him and his faults that way. He hugged her
back and rested his head on the top of hers, cherishing the
moment he was sharing with the one girl who he can count on
to be there for him.

Thinking about it now, he guessed that everything that happened today were all worth it.





yeah...contest entry in the Naruto Forums.
And it won :D


FEEL FREE TO COLOR.
MAKE SURE TO CREDIT ME!!!

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too cute!!

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So cute! 'sniff-sniff' :) You should definitly colour this! :w00t: :aww:

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I love it :heart: they look so peacefull great job

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:icondarkfireness:
AWWWWW

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:iconxxbrizone:
More lovely art from you, charu-san.

I love this, I might colour....

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naru-hina how adorable, and their first date is so naruto i loved the mini-fanfic :D

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i love your style!

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